oh the anticipation!! Hows Kaku gonna get out of this? I can't see Fiona sweeping in to save her, so its gotta be Sock!! :3 I totally cant wait for your next page, i'm in love with your pencils, and your paneling is so dramatic!~ How do you plan that all out?
I like seeing how your art style has progressed and your story telling is definitively more cohesive than at the beginning of the story. And your backgrounds are incredible, as well as your character designs. Good job!